Greetings from the Critique Club!
I really like the simplicity of the image and the gradient of color. While the focus is good, the composition seems a little unbalanced to me. I keep tilting my head to straighten out the image.
The shadow is very distracting; shooting from a different angle would have helped to hide it. That, or trying different light setup (reflectors, etc). There are quite a few light spots that I would have liked cleaned up, especially since it was an advanced editing challenge.
I would also have liked to see it as a tighter crop (tighter from the right), with a focus on the beautiful light refractions.
I hope this helps. Feel free to PM me with any questions.
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