There is nothing that should have been done differently. Perfect pose, perfect props (M4), perfect girl, perfect eyes, perfect lighting. I just can't say anything bad about it
"Tank Girl" might well be the cause of an indie counterculture revolution by empowering the punk rock female in protest to the overwhelming male dominance of the genre. Obviously the accoutrements are here and the attitude is present, but the overall impression is of the fresh faced ingenue playing dress up which is pretty much the opposite of what "Tank Girl" is all about. :>) Having said that, it's a very cool image - the face is just a little over exposed which may contribute to the "innocent" feel of the model which is at direct opposites to the zeitgeist of "Tank Girl". Still, from a technical standard it's great - artistically, I think it falls a little short of having the intended impact.