HI from teh CC CLub,
I think what this shot is sufferening from is a bright background that overtakes teh forgreound. A closer crop on teh left may have helped a little as well. This could definitely do with some contrast and or exposure sliding. He has such a happy face and that needs to be brought out, you have so many details that could be brought out with a little dodge and burn, some tweak in selective colour, shadow highlights.
play around with it and see what you come up with! |