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The girls do appear to be waiting, so the photo is appropriate for the challenge. But people wait all the time; it's part of being human. And this picture doesn't convey anything special about waiting, so it's not very interesting.
Creative choices
The position of the models within the photo is great, and their expressions depict the tired, bored kind of waiting that was intended. But there are so many other elements that the photo is very cluttered. This draws attention away from the subject.
Technical aspects
There is a very slight green color cast (common with fluorescent and mercury vapor lighting) but it's barely noticable. Otherwise the photo is technically very well made; focus, exposure, and preparation for web display are all great. |
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