Perhaps you could have cropped to reduce the bright spot at the left, or recomposed the shot to eliminate lens flare. It would be nice to see the blade mentioned in the title--without first-hand knowledge of hockey skates it's really difficult to tell what this is.
This has a lot of compression that is a bit distracting (maybe when you resaved it your softwre program did something to it). IT's also hard to tell what it is, which could work as an abstract, but there aren't any compelling things to look at to draw the eye in - something with richer colours may have worked better. This is a bit creamy and needs something punchy to attract the eye.
I'm not seeing any blades here. I really can't tell what the subject is from this photo. Perhaps a hockey skate turned upside down? It just isn't clear enough what the subject is. All I see is plastic, rivets, and some upside-down letters with a very bright light flare at the edge of the frame. It doesn't work as an abstract for me because there isn't any real wow factor in this shape or the negative space it creates.
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