Too dark and too much empty space. The streaks on the window draw you attention as well as the red flow at the top. Need to come in on the fly more. It is a good close up of that. Still 6 is not that bad of a score, all considered . PTL
Death trap? Is there supposed to be a spider web there? It looks like there may be, but I can't tell. Excellent composition, just needs some work, IMO.
ugh, poor thing. challenge -- met. technical -- could you have gotten closer to the fly with your camera or by cropping? if not, fine. if yes, i think it would've benefitted the photo by focusing the viewer more on the fly. composition -- the flower in the background is the brightest bit of color in an otherwise very muted photo, and distracts a lot from your subject. the scratches in the glass do, too, to some degree. -- gr8photos.
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