develop the raw with dpp. in photoshop: crop, levels, curves, selective desaturation in the cyan and blu channels, clone out some little point,d&s,usm, selective blur.
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First Impression: Rather than being drawn to the texture of the dead flowers I'm distracted by the rather boring wall.
Composition: The central composition isn't doing this image any harm, then again, its not very interesting.
Tecnical: This doesn't 'pop' or have any 'wow' factor for me, exposure is ok but the focus is a little soft in places
Artistic: For me this is rather bland and have much artistic value sorry.
Overall thoughts: I guess you chose this location for the nice little crack? but I think it was the wrong choice. I just glanced at your profile and saw your top 2 submissions are flowers and am sure you agree that they are so much better than this. 5.5 is a good final score I think.
Get in touch if you'd like to discuss further Gennaro.
Now this is nice. I love the way the crack in the wall seems to represent a rift between the two flowers as if they were two people who have argued or split which seems to be reflected in the title. Good work
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