Greetings from Ernie of The Critique Club!
Subject: The photo definately meets the challenge description and is well presented.
Composition: I like the diagonal 2/3 1/3 composition you have used here. (although being afraid of heights I find it a bit dizzying!)
Technicals: Overall exposure is good, but the shot seems to lack some "pop" that would put it into the "wow" catagory when the viewer sees it. Perhaps a slight boost in contrast (making sure the highlights do not blow out) would help.
Improvements: Other then a slight boost in contrast and saturation of the shadow area I think you have done quite well with this image.
I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
Ernie |
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