Very slick presentation. You know what you did right so I'll just focus on a couple minor issues that jump out at me. First, the light on his left hand, (i.e. the streak). That should have been spotted and fixed. Also that same hand would look better had it been relaxed rather than clenched especially given the location of the hand. :) Also, if it was relaxed you could have shown a nice big ring that could have served as a double entendre. Other than that the technicals are flawless, a very professional image.