You've started with a great concept here and then ruined it with the processing.
Firstly the nose has been retouched to the point where it looks almost flat and without definition. After that the cheeks, especially in the lower left of the frame have lost all definition due to the retouching, and have ended up looking like they don't curve at all. It appears from this shot that the face stretches straight out of the frame and doesn't curve round!
The eyes are good, I like the detail you have there, and they look natural. The colours on the lips are great, though the left side seems to be a bit blurred.
the lips look nice , great colors , but the eyes completely take away from this shot... would have been better if the focus was entirely on the lips and perhaps from a slightly different angle than straight on
the eyes and nose alone would make a great photo, her skin around the eyes and nose, and above her lip seem a bit too smooth compared to the rest of her face.
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