I really like the angle! I also like the lines and patterns from the boy´s hands and from the circular stand they are sitting on. However, I would have tried to simplify the "composition" if possible - to make the most important things stand out clearer. For example I think that this image could benefit from only having the two boys, instead of three (the ones reaching out). The "third" kid makes the composition less symmetrical, and you dont see his face either, making him less interesting. I think I would also only use one can (the one in the middle) - making the picture imply that there is an act of kindness taking place.
But if course this is just my personal opinion, and in the end, it all depends on what "message" you want the image to deliver. |