DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest
 
Challenge Entries
This image is not a part of any challenge.
Portfolio Images
This image is not part of a public portfolio.
DSD_3199-CROP3B-X640c.jpg
DSD_3199-CROP3B-X640c.jpg
citymars


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Date Uploaded: Jun 17, 2009

Viewed: 125
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0

Same photo as my Construction II entry, but different crop.

Entry:

Please log in or register to add your comments!

AuthorThread
06/26/2009 09:46:39 AM
I agree with [user]The Tourist[/user] as to your challenge entry, but they're both excellent work. I really like the geometry on this one, but the portrait crop is more "exciting". Great processing in both.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/26/2009 09:44:15 AM
Nice capture and processing. Where were you when you shot this?
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/26/2009 07:17:31 AM
I think your entry shot was the correct/best choice. I think the portrait framing/crop adds to convey height. I don't think the addition of the beams in this landscape framing/crop adds to the image. Your entry shot shows the depth of the beam he is standing on and I think that conveys the "risk" of his occupation better. Also, your entry shot shows more of the beam he is guiding in place, which conveys the precarious nature of a "loose" swinging beam. The other shots don't convey the "drama" of what he is doing; the entry shot with him standing, knees bent, steadying himself shows the tension of him guiding the beam... Entry shot is definitely the best image IMO.
  Photographer found comment helpful.