Greetings from the Critique Club
I think you did pretty well considering it's your first day with the D700. Usually takes a few days to get the feel of a new camera (at least I find it so). You scored pretty well with this image, so well done. Interesting to note you did not receive any ones or twos, congrats, that doesn't happen often.
The diagonal composition works extremely well for this subject. The duotone conversion is also very well done. I wonder how it would look with the focus on the front bust rather than the middle one? Don't know if it would have helped your score at all. I actually really like it as it is. I didn't vote in this challenge, but would have likely given it a 7.
Have to add the title was really good too!
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