Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Composition:
I think the composition is pretty good, I feel you were maybe attempting to frame the shot with the tree on the right but in this case I think it has worked against you in that it makes the shot look overly fussy, with so much going on in the buildings construction I think that getting in front of the tree may have made for a stronger image. However you have created some strong leading lines in to the red area of the building so in that respect maybe you achieved your goal.
Camera Work:
Nice use of a long exposure to get the shot in what must have been fairly difficult conditions.
Post-Processing:
My first thoughts were that this is way over saturated in both blues and reds and if I am honest I think in this case it very much adversely affected your score.
Sharpening looks good, infact all other elements of the post work looks to be fine just maybe a bit heavy handed on the Hue / Sat Sliders this time out.
My Opinion:
I feel your image meets the challenge nicely and is a well executed shot, as I stated above I think the post work (or one element of it) maybe held you back from a achieving a better score, you've captured some lovely lines which lead you nicely through the main elements of the shot.
Good luck in future challenges!
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