I agree with the border comments and here's why. My eye first goes to the dome, well placed on a third, then travels on the horizontal building line out to the left. When it runs out of building to look at there, it goes back and follows the archways flowing smoothly toward me. Very nice... until suddenly BAM, it runs smack into a black wall. IMO it would be more effective if my eye/imagination were allowed to extrapolate and continue that flow right off the edge of the photo. I do like your choice of perspective and the contrast between the weathered stone and the new foliage.
I hope this helps. I always hate when commenters say they don't like something but don't say why, or give me any tips on improvements :) |