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I like the idea of the adults/friends playing on the swing. The person on the swing is nicely focused. B&W is a nice choice. However, what detracts from the image are 1. the swing chain going through the center of the gal in the back, 2. the guy in the back should either be fully cropped out or fully included. So maybe position the people better next time and watch the timing so that the chain doesn't block the people. The DOF is fine, I think the two in the background are fine either way (focused or slightly blurred.) Nice attempt. |
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