Nice, narrow band of tones. Great make-up. I find the choice of jewelry distracting, though, and far less glamorous than she is. Pearls or some sparkly chain or even an Hermes-style scarf would have been a better choice.
Nice glamour feel to the pose and a fun comp. The lighting is holding this back some as it's a bit harsh on the face. Still an 8 from me as it's one of the stronger ones thus far in this challenge.
Great capture and a very pretty girl! I think the lighting is a little harsh though. Moving the flash 45 degrees to the left or right and/or adding a modifer, umbrella, etc. would have helped soften the light and give a more natural shadow pattern. Nice capture though. Keep up the good work!