OH WOW! I love the soft feel of this shot. In addition, I like how you've placed the models. I kind of wish that rock in the lower right were not there, but, what can you do. Also, the somewhat muted colors work very well.
Ok. I like the soft focus and clarity. This is captured well photographically, but what are you trying to say? What's the pitch, what's the story? Are they friends? Are they more than friends? Two of them seem to be disrobed except for the towel/blanket.