Well, sound more to me like a De motivation poster .. Fly .. and you will crash :)
Reminds me of Madagascar 2 '' The good news we are landing shortly, The bad news, we are crash landing :) .. 7
Like the saying, and really like how it ties in with the photo. The airplane shell may be a little dark, but its hard with the light conditions.
I feel the words whould have been two sentences though, as two statements. Small thing, but I think it would have looked a little more pollished. Also not sure about this texxt, especailly with this subject. Something cleaner and more defined I think would help the overall composition.
This image looks like it belongs in the other challenge. It is a fine image, but it speaks of the warning of past disasters that is not a powerfull motivational tool.