I'm sorry.. I just don't get this photo. What are you trying to say? I will read the details after the challenge is over, and hope there are comments there to explain.
hahaha, funny, but for the challenge it's a stretch, i think. oh well. technical -- overall, the photo needs to be a little more sharp and crisp, i think. composition -- your subject is centered in the middle, the two guys' heads are cut off by it and there's a lot of stuff going on in the background ... it's hard to take these kind of shots where you can't control the environment, i know. -- gr8photos.
A rather confusing shot to me. If the main subject is the huge lens dead center, than I think that the people are distracting, and need to be blurred out. I understand that not all cameras have DOF, so if not, not a huge deal. They are still distracting though. lighting seems good, and the focus on the lens seems ok, but Im still not sure I'm seeing this right. To me, the people look like a reflection in a glass, or window that this dark lens is encased in. Not really sure though. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~