Hi,
Nice try in here,
I'd say having the mouth open with some food showing wont find lots of admirers in here :)
Maybe taking a bite, a title that promote eating healthy would be a better composition,
Keep shooting and trying :)
Take good care,
Just seems a snapshot, and the slogan does not really motivate me in any way. However, seeing this guy chewing with his mouth open does motivate me to give this a low vote. Sorry to be so harsh, but this just does not work for me on any level.
Hmmm, motivtaional poster? Not really meeting the challenge here.
On top of that, the photo looks much more like a snapshot than an intentionally composed photo. The background elements are distracting. The black and white is good, but not really what would normally be seen int his type of challenge....
this photo lacks of a border and motivational message in the photo(I'd prefer there to be one, consider it as you were writting a motivational letter and following certain rules) and the b&w isn't much appealing for me for this photo