Focusing doesn't quite work here. The clip on the AltGR key is fairly sharp but the rest aren't and it makes the picture look disorganised. The points of interest for the eye are (1) the brightest part (which isn't in focus) and (2) the point of sharp focus (which is in a very odd place). Background is also confusing - whay a laptop?
DOF is excellent and I like the B and W. I feel led to the right of the photo where your best focus is but don't find anything there to hold my attention. Perhaps the angle is just a bit off. DPz