The university campuses here are truly beautiful, and today we were out to see an Iranian film at the university when I came across this little garden with the park bench that I just couldn't pass up.
I'd really like a little feedback on how I might improve the colours here.
Love the pose and the setting. I played with the colors (selective color) and added a bit of cyan and magenta to the yellow (and reduced the yellow of the yellow) then did the same with neutral. Not sure it made a lot of difference and kinda do like the tones you have here to begin with.
Sometimes I just play with the hue and saturation to see if I can get a palette that is more pleasing to my eye. I didn't really notice anything wrong with the color, though. Just giving you feedback as requested. Doesn't necessarily pop, but looks very natural and consistent with the realistic pose.
This is a beautiful natural looking portrait. I love the dof and the colour is okay. Maybe you could take the green down a fraction in the red and yellow?
Oh I think the colors are spot on! The hot spot on the upper right corner is a distraction to me. Maybe a square crop? Beautiful model and relaxed pose.
Very nice candid-portrait look. I love the bokeh and the good focus on the girl's face and hands, and the pose is interesting. If it's posed, maybe just bring her eyes just a touch more forward, but that's just an idea, not a complaint. Great job.
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