The balance of this is good, but seeing the bases of the candles disturbs the photo for me. You might try running it through Neat Image to get rid of some of the grain.
This is exceptionally pixelatd. I'm not sure if decreasing your ISo to 80 or 100 (never ever go above that with a digital camera, despite the rules for low lighting with a 35mm) - or if maybe your resolution isn't as high with the camera. I'm not sure how you could improve it, but it's a good composition - just very distracting with the heavy pixelation - especially along the top.