I enjoy these type of shots. May I suggest that the burgundy coloured flower as your subject would have stood out more as it is drawing my eye away from the yellow flower.
With a little softer focus, this would have been a brilliant image in the post-modernist impressionism genre of photography. It's very effective and the background has a painted feel to it very remeniscent of Claude Monet or Thomas Dowling. A very effective image with a lot of artistic impact in addition to it's technical success. Well done.