Great Idea! Love the look on the man's face. Don't know if it would have been possible but it would have made the picture even nicer (IMO) if you could have cloned out the flash glare on the oven door or smudged it so it wasn't so noticeable.
There is some foreground blurring, and the glare spot is a bit distracting to me. Would also have been nice to have a backdrop to emphasize the subject more.
Great idea, but the the execution falls a little short. I think the use of flash hurts the picture overall by creating unwanted shadows and overexposure.