Interesting image with lots of potential. Unfortunately its a little washed out and overexposed especially in the sky. Levels and curves correction in post processing would definitely help. With the levels corrected, the colors would appear richer and more vibrant.
Compositionally there isn't really anything for my eye to rest on. That being said I do see some nice wedge shapes in this image which could be used to anchor the image if you were to shoot from a different angle.
A good solid image that is crisp, sharp and properly framed and composed but less than a complete success from it's rather unsaturated appearance give it an over exposed look which also affects it's artistic impression. From an artistic standpoint, it is an intersting image but of less than universal appeal. A good entry into the challenge.
A very pretty place, try to take this at either end of the day (whichever has the sun behind you the most) when you can reduce the glare, and also get the sky to have some colour.