i think the bubble in this photo is a bit hard to make out makeing it distracting. maybe a closer crop could of helped isolating just the pins with the splash,
A technical success, it's less than successful in an artistic sense. DOF control is on the edge of being good and the lighting isn't over done creating blooms. The subject is less than interesting. Perhaps a different background with a slightly different angle would have helped. A little more thought and better framing would have brought the rating higher.