This is one of those images where different top crops create seperate and very different images - very hard to comment on. From a technical standpoint it is nearly perfect - tones and highlights are extremely well controlled and the monotone effect with a light sepia touch is very effective. It is also an effective artistic effort that has a very minor issues like an ineffective and overly undetailed sky. A good solid effort which could be considered a top twenty image.
Good perspective and tonal treatment. Not anything that hasn't been done before, but that could be said about many of mine. ...and the original ones of mine tend to bomb, so take my input for what it's worth! (Which is $0)