I like the way ,the central theme 'crayons' and 'colour' runs through the scene. According to me the picture would have benefited with the girl alone and the colour in her face being the centre of focus ... somehow with too many things it has weakened the picture as it looks a bit busy, it is making the eye wander around
personally, i would have tightened the picture to get more attention on the tat...as it is my eyes are drawn more to her face than to the crayon drawing
This is one of those on the margin images that with a little more thought, could have been an outstanding entry into the challenge. The subject matter is being demonstrated, but the subject is distorted by the image's insistance on looking at the model and not the model drawing the tattoo with crayons. It might have helped to change the focus to the tattoo and the hand holding the crayon and have kept the artist less in focus to create a much more effective image with a lot of visual impact. A good idea just a little short on execution.
I think this is a really fun shot. The lighting is great, the eye makeup adds to the idea of colors. I think the grass makes a nice color pop but the texture of it is a bit distracting to me. Also, her bra strap is a bit distracting as well.
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