Interesting use of internal framing, but I'm not sure why you elected to include the person, to me that really makes this a snapshot when it could have been "art." imho
I had to return to this image because on the one hand, it's a great concept and a different look at the challenge subject. On the other hand, it suffers from a few unfortunate blemishes which, on initial review, were seen as negative. On the fourth pass, it now makes a much more favorable impression than at first. The framing, slight offset of the model and the concept of trains are all included in a great image. It might have helped to do a little crop at the top to increase the impact of the window view and model, but it works as it is. Well done.