A unique and different look at the challenge subject, this is a perfect concept executed in fine fashion. A technical and artistic success with nothing to critique or call as a major, or even minor, flaw. This should be a ribbon winner as it's very unique and well presented.
Good color. Not sure about your vert and horiz. I see the 1st full stripe on the left is vert, but then your lettering on top is off. How does it look if you set your letters horiz and let the stripes fall where they may...