This is how the editing should have been done for this entry.
I rushed the editing in the original a little. Also, after several recent entries that received comments saying that they lacked contrast, I attempted to please DPC voters and really make this pop with vivid colors. I think that this was a mistake and I surely would have scored even better with the revised editing.
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