This is such a great idea!
It's a pity it's a bit dark, but with 1/4 of second probably all you could get out of it. Longer exposure - motion blur, higher ISO - more noise.
Given that, good job!
Very clever and worthy of a 10 just for being inventive and using the creative process to capture a terrific image never mind the technical perfection. This is wonderful.
This is so close to great. Some more dynamic light to pop out those greens, and then maybe her complexion, and bam you'd be in the top 20 with this shot.