This one definitely made me hear the song - and I didn't even see the guy checking his watch until you pointed it out. I can be kinda dense that way. Very appropriate shot to go with your title!
I don't know, I really like whats happening between these two but I'm wishing they were slightly more in fous, and the guy checking the time is a little distracting. But for a candid night shot and no flash, you've captured something very special