There's a church a few blocks from my house with a nice rectangular neon sign reading "Jesus Saves" -- I almost used that for my submission. I realize it's part of the "point" of the picture, but it feels a little too busy for me. Although maybe with a title "Jesus Sells" ...
Oh I want to see this for real! As a picture..hmmm.. The over exposed bottom right is to important visually, and Jesus should be the visual center, don't you think? he is well placed but lost a bit by that bright area. Is he holding a marujuana leaf? There are so many details I want to seel better, 8