This would have been so much better if you had closed in on the central figuer in the fountain. The other streams of water don't add to the idea, they are just distracting. We really don't need to see half of that kid's head in the lower right corner. The fence adds nothing to this idea either.
Great take on the idea! Composition and nicely saturated colors make this a good picture. Cropping out the person on the bottom right may have improved it a little.
Very Clever. I think if you had framed the subject differently (i.e. did not cut the top off, less DOF, and not capturing so much of the surroundings) you would have had a perfect shot. IMHO.
Very nice picture. I think I would have cropped it to get rid of the shadow on the left and the persons head on the right. The colors are very nice. I recognize it from Stone Mountain Park! Good Luck!