Was this taken with a cell-phone camera? It seems in focus but it's highly pixelated and it's distracting to the overall image (which is well composed).
Very out of focus otherwise it has some potential but I'm not convinced it is a natural scene and not a set-up. I'm a bit turned off by the fakey look of the girls' gestures, as if they have been posed an directed. They look overly conscious of what they are doing which kind of ruins the appeal. I think the problem is overkill. Only one of the girls really needed to be fidgeting (my money is on the nail biter---she looks more 'real').
The image here looks slightly distorted/elongated. You're permitted 150K, this image is only 14K - so a better quality image would improve the image's appearance. I like the candid quality of this shot and the direction of the light.
unfortunately the quality of the image is off. could've worked to your advantage maybe if focused/cropped/composed solely on the right female and lowered the perspective to look up past the cup at her face....but really i don't see what is so unladylike
I don't find this picture very interesting. It looks like there are a lot of digital artifacts from resizing or too much jpeg compression. The light on the white shirt at the left attracts my attention and pulls my eye out of the picture.