An abstract has to convey something beyond just color and light. While a good capture, this is abstract only in the sense of being blurred = in short, meaningless.
What a wonderful feel to this more simple offering. It's almost as if you took pastels and did a rubbing on a sandstone (or similar type) surface. Wonderful texture to it. I would have preferred a title that didn't identify the subject matter.
I like the colors very much, but I don't find the rest very compelling. perhaps if the lines/items were going at more of a diagonal. It seems kind of static.