hm I dont like the composition is the main subject of the pic that man or sun? maybe if he was in from of the sun - you still could see the silhoutte and the sunlight too... just four from me for this sorry ;D
brano
For the first few moments on this new world, he stumbled about, confused and disoriented, and weak. However, by some deep instinct within, he managed to find his way out of the dense junglescape he had found himself in, and discovered a wide open beach and stood staring at the sea. Not that he had names for these things, for he was a stranger here, and for the moment was merely trying to make sense of things, and survive.
He stumbled to the edge of the water, and suddenly noticed that he was getting stronger by the second. He could feel the heat flowing from the bright and powerful circle in the sky, which we call the sun. A heat that flooded into him, a heat that his body soaked up like a sponge. As it did, he stood up straighter. As it did he felt energy pulse within him. As he did he felt and saw his body changing, molding, building.
Not long after, he raised is arms to the sky, and flexed his arms and knew that he was no more powerful than he had ever dreamed he could become, and it was because of this strange new alien star. He shouted in triumph, and raced down the beach, towards a tale to be told another time.
I would like to see this shot whithout the black space at the bottom. The silhouette is cool with this beautiful sunset. I don't know if i'm wrong, but the silhouette looks a little oof too...maybe it's just a impression, but i'll take another look at other monitors. nice shot.