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please feel free to update with more info on what you were thinking. I'd love to read more about this. It's great!
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Centered composition works well and the lockers/doors with reflections do a great job framing your subject. This reminds me of how difficult high school and adolescence can be.
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Ceiling is out. Darker maybe.
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Awesome shot... i love how the colours are limited to red/white/black, and the reflection in the floor. Looks like a hospital, but this would also be cool in a school hallway. 8
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Interesting image with nice creative composition. The reflections work well and make it seem as if the girl is hovering or levitating. 7
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reminds me of 'shining'... great atmosphere six from me
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Not sure what is it, but you created very appealing composition - colors, lines, reflections - all works very well together.
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This shot screams "stock"! Great job on the conceptual theme, "alienation" is another.
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Such a different photo, it's a great thing, love the colors and lines.
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Well captured and presented. This probably asks more questions than it answers. I like that.
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recommend you darken the tones of the floor reflections more (you may have to do this selectively), Nice abstract. good technique , well executed. You have to experiment with the post processing more. 6
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This is a different perspective. Very well done. 8
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I would have loved to see this shot with the lights down the hall off. It's still a great composition. 8
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Good perspective and composition.
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The red, white and black colours make a strong graphic image, well done.
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I love how this picture is composed with the ground level perspective. Well done. 8.
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The processing enhances this image very well. I love the concept. (voted earlier comment only now)
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Great, great , great - the only thing: less floor
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Good clarity and well framed
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Very effective use of framing. Almost psychedelic in its effect.
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Wow. Perfect use of central composition. a very intriguing shot. 8.
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Love the horizontal stripes with all the vertical lines, inspired!
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A fave for this. Fluorescent lights are often poor for interesting shots, but you have taken good advantage of them and also conveyed your title well.
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I like it. Its different and very interesting in an edgy, artsy sort of way. I love the clean bold lines.
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The repititions are what really creates the interst in this photo, the color being limited to just three colors furthur drives the interest. I don't know if it was by design or by accident, but the horizontal stripes of the sweatshirt adds a nice bit of graphical whimisy.
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I love the lines and reflections - very fine centered composition!
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clear focus, clean colors
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Love that reflective floor.
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The leading lines, light and shadow, the reds whites and blacks, the stripes repeated both horizontally and vertically, the reflection continuing in the floor...all of these combine to a make a great picture. You have a great eye!! This is not a picture that I typically would like, however, you have combined all the elements so well, I love it!! Bumping it to a 10.
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Better not be there when the mop and wax crew comes by.
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nice use of a low POV, and the semi-high key works too
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Very nice. I love the sitter and the colors are nice and natural.
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I like the dialog between the stripes of sorts
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Takes me back to my school days when I was sent out of class to sit in the hall :)
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Quick, somebody tip that janitor! Them's some seriously nice floors!
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Terrific! Colors, composition and processing- all great!
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1/4 Hard Candy + 1/4 Shining + 1/4 Elephant + 1/4 Paranoid Park = a perfect cocktail. 8
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great color and placement
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Nice shot, the coloring and reflection are prefect.
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Simple and good. Nice shot.
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creative photo, love the reflections on the floor, the lines and the red / white colors
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Such an emotional image. Love how you chose to shoot them from behind. Gives it more impact. The reflections and red walls really add a lot. Great angle to boot. Well done.
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Great light and relfetion. I love the symentry.
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I wish there was a little less floor in this image, but the colors work very well. Whites are a little bright though.
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I love the lines & the colors in this. The reflections work well, and the student (?) provides a great focal point.
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INteresting play with lines here. The reflection really adds to this. The lines in the sweatshirt fit well with the perspectives of the ceiling - and there could be some metaphor here since the figure sort of rebels against the composition but at the same time fits neatly into it. 8
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great composition! I love the opposite lines of the hoodie verses the lines of the doors and hall.
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Excellent composition. Nice "jail" suggestion with the striped hoodie.
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Ohhh.... too cool! The reflections making vertical lines yet broken in the middle with the horizontals. Lovely.
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Just love the lines on this, both vertical and horizontal. Very bold colors, and the reflection on the floor is incredible. Great work.
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Very cool shot! Love the lines, and the implied vanishing point. Interesting image. Nice job!
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A wonderful sense of design and color in this emotive image! 9
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Whoever you are, you're a lines master! Clever clever work.
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Very centered, but a nice reflection on the floor and I like the simple use of colors here.
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All the complementing vertical and horizontal lines, from shadows to shirt, make this shot superb.
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Interesting lines in this composition.
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looks to posed, not like a real breakdown. well exposed and focused.
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I like the red on one side and white on the other. Also, the vertical vs. horizontal lines.
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Love the reflections on the floor.
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i love the angle you shot at
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maybe a bit too much glare (though that could cuase a breakdown for sure!)
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