This is an interesting looking building, but I don't think you've made the most of the shot. I realise you may be going for something different because you see it all the time, but from my point of view I've never seen it before and feel that you should have taken in the whole building.
Also, I'm guessing that you've done some sort of dodging / burning here but you have ended up with halos around the building which don't help the shot at all.