Challenge:Habits (Basic Editing I) Camera:Sony DSC-F828 Location: On the floor of a pub Date: May 16, 2004 Aperture: 5.6 ISO: 64 Shutter: 250 Date Uploaded: May 16, 2004
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background (20% Weight): 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing (20% Weight): 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. (30% Weight): 5
How well does it meet the challenge (30% Weight): 8
Total Rating (Rounded) 6
Pretty shot. I love the lines and light in this. Simple but effective. (Just saw a mug at a gift shop with a sayingwhich you may appreciate: "24 hours in a day, 24 beers in a case, coincidence?")
I like the combination with the shadows on the floor, but the baseboard molding in the background is a distraction. It also appears that only the first bottle is in focus, so some depth of field adjustments were needed.
Very good. Great lighting and composition. One suggestion: The bottles don't look cold. I don't see any condensation on them. As a product shot, they would look much more tempting and refreshing if they had condensation on them. Great nonetheless! 7
Nice shot, but you didn't show it with any food like the title mentions. I like the pattern of light/shadow on the floor and the way the light shines through the bottles.
Hmm where have I seen something like this before Oh yeah I know I did it for strength but I only had one Sleamans cream ale :-)
And BTW I found the light reflection looks better with the embossed bottle label turned to the sun... (joking) Dam now you went and made me thirsty.
7
A very nice shot - the repetition of the bottle lends itself to the habit idea. I like your choice of lining them up in the sun with the louvers creating the lines. For such a particular shot I'd like to see things a little more precise ... the labels and embossing all lined up. Good colors, I like the balance of the reds and yellows.
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