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Nice family photo. Good use of a natural eninviroment.
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It looks like your subject is quite the artist (assuming she painted the cotton picture). Probably okay shot for a brochure, though fairly flat flash lighting and cluttered frame are real problems.
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The shadow from the flash is really distracting and the light feels harsh.
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She has a nice genuine smile. Unfortunate about the shadow from the flash though.
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Nice smile, and I get the feeling that she's a painter or the cotton has some special meaning. Just a suggestion, but I would take out a couple of the items on the right to keep the focal point on your main subject.
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Looks like there's a story here. Nice lighting and detail.
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She's very pretty and well-photographed... but without more hint I don't have any clue why there's so much stuff in the photo with her.
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This must be someone close to you with some things she's proud of. The flash hurts this shot with shadows and glare. Since this is probably an old shot you picked and you couldn't re-shoot maybe you could have fixed it post-processing with dodge and burn and blur.
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maybe bounce the flash next time?
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Is she the artist? A beautiful painting.
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sorry but I have to give 1 this is for me just snapshot to family album..
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This is a nice family snapshot.
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Nice portrait and a beautiful drawing.
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Neat shot of an artist and her work. A bit more contrast might compensate for the bright cast in the photo.
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I feel that there is too much going on. She has a beautiful smile, but somehow it got overpower by all that stuff on the background.
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Nice portrait, although it lacks contrast probably due to lighting problems.
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A little snapshotish for me. To many shadows and poor light but she looks like a very lovely woman.
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Good idea but a little off for me. Maybe the subject needs to be more centered and the lighting a bit better.
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Can't really decide what the subject of the photo is... maybe too much going on. Technically well done :)
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the direct flash does not create an image that is too appealing especially with the harsh shadows.
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Lighting could be better.
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maybe a wider shot to add more to her left would have scored a little higher from me
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The composition is balanced, but the subjects seem very cramped in the frame. The lighting is a bit harsh.
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Is she the artist of the boll?
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the light makes the shot a little flat, and it is too soft in my opinion
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I'm not a big fan of direct flash. If you can direct your flash, bounce it off the ceiling instead.
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Nice expression. The objects distract from the subject... hard to decide what to look at. On-camera flash is a bit harsh.
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colors a bit dull and flat, curves/levels
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Nice portrait. Maybe could use a little lift in contrast on her face.
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