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03/11/2009 08:45:41 PMPost actions
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03/09/2009 10:23:09 PMPost actions
Skin looks nice but the background seems too close and wrinkled
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03/09/2009 06:59:27 PMPost actions
Background paper crinkled, the lighting scheme accents the model's nose. Shadow under eyes not pleasant.
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03/06/2009 05:50:48 AMPost actions
Cute photo, but has a few flaws.
The background creases are the main one.
Move your model further from the background and use a wider aperture to throw it out of focus.
Try to avoid creases in the first place.
Lighting is OK. I would prefer less shadow from the on camera flash. You can use it, but dial it down more. Maybe try getting further back and use a telephoto.
Beautiful skin by the way.
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03/05/2009 01:56:35 PMPost actions
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03/04/2009 08:38:15 PMPost actions
a little too sharp for my taste... plus you can see the flash in her gums. That's the only thing I would change.
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03/04/2009 07:55:04 PMPost actions
Wonderful lighting here. Pretty shooting!!
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03/04/2009 05:59:15 PMPost actions
dosnt think the purple background adds anything to this image - its a ok portrait with a not so ok background - just my opp
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03/04/2009 03:03:50 PMPost actions
Background is too messy (wrinkles!!) Light a little harsh. Otherwise nice natural expression and well composed portrait.
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03/04/2009 02:17:37 AMPost actions
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03/04/2009 12:49:51 AMPost actions
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