would be nice to see more of the desktop in the picture. don't like the fact that the monitor is cut, and that silver wire coming from beneath it, does not help at all.
I love shakespeare also! The only thing I see that I would have done differently is either cut the computer out completely or put more of it in. The cut off head is a little off putting. Hope that helps
Too much stuff is getting cut off here - I think the ruler is the only thing in the frame that doesn't get chopped off along an edge. I think that a more inclusive shot of a larger, messier destop would be better. Also, the white wire is bright and distracting, I'd move that.
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