Hmmm... this is very clever! I'm confused about the 'extra' mouth on the shirt. And I don't like the partial bit of face and glasses... the hand and piece were enough, I think.
I also wish the eyes were more in focus, but I do understand that problem.
Those are just my opinions... and every voter will have one (or two). *grin*
Anyway, I hope this does well for you... despite the issues I have with it, it's still a 6 in my book. :)
very creative. I would like it more if the main subject was totally in focus. I also find that the glasses on the person on the left is a bit distracting. full marks for creative though. 7