I gave your entry a 5. I could not think at the time why it did not rate higher with me, so I left a flip comment instead. Looking at it again, I think it is the close crop. The model is too close to he edge of the frame and the corner of the car seems abruptly cut off. The tilt might be an issue as well, though I didn't pay attention to that at the time of voting.
This kind of supercontrasty look sure makes her skin pop along with the reflections. But the artist seems torn between the car and her and the balancing act doesn't quite work. It's a five and a half but round up to a 6 (cause its better than my entry).