Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background (20% Weight): 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing (20% Weight): 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. (30% Weight): 4
How well does it meet the challenge (30% Weight): 8
Total Rating (Rounded) 5
The lighting on this is flat and uninteresting. The candy isn't focused very well. The hand (I suspect yours) isn't focused at all, accept in the index and middle finger. This is a very literal depiction of a habit. It doesn't really show us anything new or interesting about sugar cravings and it is not visually appealing.
Beautiful comment - I like the vibrant colors. The light is a little harsh but somehow appropriate for "getting caught". The watch band is a little distracting within the frame. I like the off center composition with the hand.