Definately grabs your attention and meets the challenge well. Has a good deal of interest but the lighting is a bit harsh. Other than improving the lighting there wasn't much else I would do to improve it.
Lighting is way too harsh here. There is a light glare on the peoney, and bad shadows on the right side. looks like you used direct flash. it didn't work in this situation.This shot has a lot of detail, and I think that it could be a really nice shot if you could find a better way of lighting it. ~Heather~
Nice macro, good job with the focus. The hot spot from the flash is a bit distracting. You could try putting a sheet of tissue paper in front of your flash to help diffuse the light.
Funny to get two shots of these ants on Peonies. I went outside to see mine and ......yes covered with ants also!! :) That sticky must be very sweet. Your shot is okay but the light is harsh and causes a glare.